Thursday, July 24, 2008

Famous five The mystery of the disappearing house

One day Famous Five were walking near a house when they heard a noise.
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"What was that?" said one of the Famous Fives.
Annie said, "It is just the wind."
But Jack still thought it was not the wind. He thought it was the house.
Jack was looking at the house. Jack turned around. When he looked at the same spot where the house was, it had gone!

"What! were is the house gone?" He told Annie, Mark, David and Quincy.

"Let's look around for clues," said the Famous Five.

Jack found something that looked like a microchip and there was something written on it, "Microchip of Bomb no. 29"

Usually the light in the lighthouse has to be off at this time, but it was on. Even if there were a light, the watchman should be there. But he was not over there.

So they thought, "Without the watchman, the light in the lighthouse won't be on."

Then, they went to the lighthouse and they saw five or six people standing there. They were planting a bomb and the house was near the lighthouse. These thieves wanted to bomb the lighthouse.

So they made a microchip which makes things disappear. They put it in the house near the lighthouse, so that people will be scared of the house and will not come near. So they can bomb the lighthouse without the police catching them. Then the Famous Five called the police and the police caught the thieves and gave the Famous Five a big trophy.

THE END.

8 comments:

Ganges said...

good story, sonu...keep writing! love, amma

sriram said...

A well written story. Keep up the good work Sohan!
Hope you come with more interesting stories like these.
Love,
Ramu Chetta

sriram said...

Moti Valiachan
A Very good story. Keep on writing short stories. With love Moti Valiachan

Unknown said...

Sonu dear

That's indeed a cute lit'l story, sure to scare the athis! So
there're no ghosts in real life? If you look for clues you can
unravel any mystery, right?
Write more and more stories. Best of luck!

Lots love and hugs
ammuma.

Unknown said...

Hi Sohan,

We're so glad you have started your own blog for short stories. You know everyday we've to cook up stories for li'l samyu and now we know where to get it from! Keep your site updated and we'll visit frequently.

With love,
Shankar uncle and Vanitha Aunty :)

Unknown said...

good job sohan

Ganges said...

it is very good and funny

Kaiwen

Anonymous said...

I liked the creativity. And if I may ask, how old are you, budding writer?